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Arms

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"Arms "
Oct 17, 2005
Zeroknight

Arms and Hands! I want to
Write you a poem you
About the good time
I need my hands to
Hold some one else hand.
Without them how we supposed to eat or hold hand.
Ode to hand how we supposed to take shower and stuff…
Treat my hands like as my friend
They won’t betray you like the world does to people
Because you are mine not theirs
Each hand comes with fives fingers,
And every body comes with two arms
                                                    End!
this is my first try on Ode (oct 17) for poetry class. I hope you will like it. Please leave a comment and thank you for your time..
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maybe there was something to this i didn't get becuase i didn't understadna few lines

''Write you a poem you''
should that not be write you a poem

''Hold some one else hand.''
should that not be hold some one elses hand

''Without them how we supposed to eat or hold hand.''
I think you purposly said hand thier, because it is what it is about

It probably did make sense and I didn't read enough into it

not everybody has two hands;)